The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart portrays the percentage of businesses making online purchases in
five
types of industries: manufacturing, construction, wholesale, retail, and Information and Communications in Canada for
five
years
, from 2015 to 2019. By and large, information and communications had the highest rates in the
five
years
,
while
construction had the least in business online. Looking into the details, it is evident that information and Communications were dominant in creating improvement in purchases online in
five
years
, starting in 2015 at 60% and considerably increasing to around 12%;
therefore
, in 2018 the rates became more than 70%.
Furthermore
, construction had the lowest percentage in 2015 but grew up to 10% in the next year and hit a peak in 2019 with 55%. Wholesale showed different data,
this
sector had 40% in 2015 and increased in the following
years
, so in 2019 the rates changed up to 60%.
However
, manufacturing had fluctuated data in the
five
years
, but they
also
reached more than 50%
at the end
of the period.
In addition
, retail had 32% in the first year, but the percentage was significantly inclined in 2016 with around 50% and was stable in four
years
.
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