The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart portrays the percentage of businesses making online purchases in
five
types of industries: manufacturing, construction, wholesale, retail, and Information and Communications in Canada for five
years
, from 2015 to 2019.
By and large, information and communications had the highest rates in the five
years
, while
construction had the least in business online.
Looking into the details, it is evident that information and Communications were dominant in creating improvement in purchases online in five
years
, starting in 2015 at 60% and considerably increasing to around 12%; therefore
, in 2018 the rates became more than 70%. Furthermore
, construction had the lowest percentage in 2015 but grew up to 10% in the next year and hit a peak in 2019 with 55%. Wholesale showed different data, this
sector had 40% in 2015 and increased in the following years
, so in 2019 the rates changed up to 60%. However
, manufacturing had fluctuated data in the five
years
, but they also
reached more than 50% at the end
of the period. In addition
, retail had 32% in the first year, but the percentage was significantly inclined in 2016 with around 50% and was stable in four years
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