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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

#women #men #strengths #weaknesses #right #males #females #professions #gender
Nowadays, most
men
 and
women
 have a profession, but some
of
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the
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people
 cannot get their ideal job because of their
gender
. In my point of view, everyone has the right to choose what they want to be and what makes them happy.
First
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 point to consider is that every single person on the planet has the freedom to do what they enjoy doing and to set goals for themselves, and one should stop someone from working in his ideal job just by the person's
gender
.
Men
 and
women
 have differences from each other, but both of them have their ways of thinking and acting, which can create amazing ideas and projects by cooperating together.
For example
, in
a
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building construction,
women
 could not be as strong as
men
 to carry heavy materials, but they will have a better perspective for a plant that will suit a future family living there.
Last
 but not least,
people
 can never underestimate anyone by their looks, characteristics or
gender
. Normally
people
 that apply for a job
that is
 unusual for their
gender
 are goal-setters,
this
 means
people
 with an objective and dreams to achieve, so they probably worked very hard for it.
For instance
, most
women
 are better at cooking than
men
, but in many
people
’s views Gordon Ramsy is the best chef in the world, and he is a man.
Afterall
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,
people
 always talk about
gender
 equality, but for
me
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 the most important thing is to show it by actions we do
everyday
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