You recently attended a job interview, but you have not heard back from the company about whether you got the job or not. Write a letter to the HR department. In your letter - describe the position you were interviewed for -explain why you think the interview was successful -say why you need to know if you've got the job or not

#job #interview #company #hr #department #position #-explain #-say #ve

Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I'm writing to request the decision of my

interview

which took place on June 3rd. I was shortlisted for the position of 'Assitant Project Manager' in the 'Good Times' company.

Thus

, I was called for an

interview

which went pretty well and I was told that I would get the decision within 5 working days. In the

interview

, I was able to successfully answer all the questions because of my past work experience in the same field.

Moreover

, my documents matched well with the role requirements and the offered salary is my expected salary;

therefore

, I believe I am a perfect fit for the job.

Also

, I received another job offer today for a similar position from a different company;

therefore

, could anyone tell me the outcome of my

interview

at the earliest?, so I can move forward with the other offer, though I'm more inclined to accept the job offer from your esteemed company. I look forward to your response. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Akshita Parasher

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

175 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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