The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
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The data expresses the
export
value
in a country for different categories in 2015 and 2016. Overall
, export
earnings
increased from 2015 to 2016 in the following categories: petroleum products
, engineered goods, Agriculture products
and textiles. On the other hand
, it decreased in the gems and jewellery categories.
The charts illustrate that, In 2015, the export
earnings
in petroleum products
were $60 billion
, then
it increased by 3% in 2016. While
the engineered goods have increased by 8.5% in 2016, its earnings
were nearly $58 billion
. On the other hand
, the export
revenues for jewellery and gems have decreased by 5.18%, Noting that the revenues were almost $51 billion
in 2015.
For Agricultural products
, the value
of export
earned in 2015 was $40 billion
, whereas
, this
value
slightly increased by 0.81% in 2016. However
, the textile earnings
were the lowest in 2015 at $38 billion
only. It showed significant growth in the value
of earnings
by 15.24%.Submitted by nohaaburab3 on
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