The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The supplied pie charts showcase how water was consumed in six different locations across the world.

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in four areas used it for agriculture,

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the other two consumed it mostly for industrial purposes.

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the charts, the overwhelming majority of contribution was made by agricultural use in both Central and South East Asia with 88 and eighty-one per cent respectively.

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, the usage of water in households of the aforementioned lands accounted for a modest 7%, which is the same as the figures for African industries. Agriculture is

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the section that constituted the greatest portion with eighty-four per cent. Meanwhile, the pattern appears to be slightly distinctive for the rest locations. Agricultural purposes in South America made a relatively large proportion in comparison with the same sector in both North America and Europe. The figures were 71, thirty-nine, and 32 per cent respectively.

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two areas industrial use accounted for approximately 50%, which is almost five times higher than the same section in South America.

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