The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures illustrate the process of
cement
-making step by step, and for producing concrete which is used for building constructions, how much cement
is used in concrete.
Overall
, for producing cement
there are two main materials
which are needed, also
it takes five different stages with three different equipment
. Concrete Correct quantifier usage
pieces of equipment
that is
used for building
Add an article
the building
have
four Change the verb form
has
materials
which gravel has the highest ratio, and water has the least.
In cement
production
there are two main Add a comma
,production
materials
: limestone and clay. At
the first stage Change preposition
In
with
crusher limestone and clay Change preposition
apply
being
powder, Wrong verb form
are
then
they are mixed very well by a mixer. After that
it is thrown in the rotating heaterAdd a comma
,that
,
and gets heated. And in the final stage grinder is used to prepare Remove the comma
apply
final
Correct article usage
the final
production
which is the Replace the word
product
cement
and go for packing.
for producing concrete there is only one equipment and four materials
. Gravel which are small stones have
the most ratio in concrete with 50%. Sand has the one-fourth ratio, and Change the verb form
has
cement
and water have 15% and 10% respectively. All the materials
are filled in the concrete mixer to mix well to produce concrete.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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