WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The graphs describe New Zealand's
trades
Fix the agreement mistake
trade
show examples
with Australia and
Japan
between the years 1994 and 2004.
Overall
, it can be seen an upward trend in Australian importation over
time
.
On the contrary
, the imports from
Japan
have decreased in the same period of
time
. Regarding imports from Australia, it is noticed a certain fluctuation over
time
. In 1996 there was a significant increase of nearly 3000
NZ
million
.
After
this
, in 1999, a sharp decrease happened reaching its lowest point at 3000
NZ
million
.
Next,
it had a quick rose to features over 7000, followed by a steep drop of 2000
NZ
million
, which ended up with a rapid increase to 8000
NZ
million
.
On the other hand
, importation from
Japan
had decreased in the same period of
time
.
However
Add a comma
,However
show examples
some significant differences can be pointed out over
time
. Until 1997 the features gradually increased to over 6000
NZ
million
.
After
this
period, a substantial decline is shown with values dropping around 2000. In the year 2000, a new rose occur reaching the same point in 1997 and in the following ,years a downward tendency can be seen where features dropped to around 2000
NZ
million
.
While
an increase is seen in New Zealand imports from Australia,
on the other hand
, from
Japan
it has decreased.
Submitted by acarina.simoes on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this, on the other hand".
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, time, nz, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: