The graph below shows the percentage of households, grouped by poverty, on the basis of access to refrigerator, electricity and water in Ghana for the year 1991/1992 to 1998/1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the percentage of households, grouped by poverty, on the basis of access to refrigerator, electricity and water in Ghana for the year 1991/1992 to 1998/1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The column graph
illustartes
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illustrates
the difference between 3 class categories from Ghana and the percentage of
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access
each of them had
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3 different electric appliances over the
years
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
non poor
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habitants have a higher percentage of accessibility than the poor and very poor ones. It can be seen, that there is an increasing trend between the
years
91/92 and 98/99 of access
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all the basic amenities for richer people compared to the less rich ones.
For instance
, the
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access
of
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the refrigerator was approximately 20% more
accesible
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accessible
for the noon poor compared to the other two.
On the other hand
, it can be observed that over the
years
the access increases for reach people but decreases for the group of people with less money.
This
is clearly shown
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the electricity service where rich
household
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households
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had 73% of access during the
years
91 and 92,
however
, the poor ones were at 57% in 91 and 92 and decreased a 10% in 98 and 99.
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