the bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the in formation by selecting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

the bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the in formation by selecting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart serves how much
water
was used by the citizen In Australia in the previous year
while
the pie chart depicts the spending of that in several sectors in 2014. In general, the total consumption of
water
was mostly spent In a particular
city
(Perth).
Moreover
, the purpose of spending was mostly for Agriculture.
Last
year, Perth was the
city
with the highest average
in
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water
consumption (300 kilolitres per property). The amount decreased in Brisbane, the second
city
, which used around 250. The amount in Brisbane was higher than that in Adelaide And Sydney which spent approximately 240 and 200 kilolitres per property. The
city
with the lowest
water
utilization was Canberra which only took below 150. The proportion of
water
expanding in Agriculture was 67%, which was the biggest amount in the circle. It was followed by the Household (9%). Electricity and gas supply got 7% each, same as
water
supply, sewage and drainage. Mining had the lowest proportion with only 2%, lower than Manufacturing and other Industrial which got 4% each.
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