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Write an email to the restaurant's manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

#email #restaurant #manager
Dear Restaurant Manager, I am writing to you to express my concern about my recent experience at your restaurant. I booked a place for my anniversary dinner party with my family on 31st December 2022. I had an inferior experience with the service and the food.
Furthermore
, I had to wait for an hour to get my table even though I have reserved it in advance.
In addition
 to ,
this
 I have ordered a vegetarian pizza since we are all vegetarian.
Although
, there was a piece of meat inside it. ,
Moreover
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 the waiters seem to be untrained as they were not able to explain the food properly.
Therefore
, I would like to request you to enhance your service quality,
as well as
 train your staff properly to get better positive reviews.
On the other hand
 please make sure that chefs should prepare food
according to
 the customer's
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. I would seriously like to get a refund for my order and the receipt is attached. Hope you would consider my opinion to improve the quality. Regards, Surbhi
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