The chart above shows the percentage of people consuming five servings of fruit and vegetables divided by three categories of men, women and children in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
The chart above shows the percentage of people consuming five servings of fruit and vegetables divided by three categories of
men
, women and children
in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that women have the upper hand over the other two in the case of consumption during the period.
In the 2001 chart, the percentage of children
and men
who ate the full five servings was only about 13% in children
and 17% in the herd and remained unchanged for the following 2 years. From 2004 to 2006 there was a gradual growth of about 18% children
to about 22% in 2006 and about 23% for Change preposition
for children
men
to about 27% in 2006.Children
continued to increase the following year, and men
remained the same.By 2008, both had decreased with children
about
24% and Change preposition
at about
men
about
26%.
Among women, eating five portions of fruit and vegetables per day was the highest of the other two, around 21% in 2001 and Change preposition
at about
continuing
to grow rapidly in the following years with a peak in 2006 Wrong verb form
continued
35
% and Change preposition
at 35
decrease
in the following years with 2007 being about 33% and Correct article usage
a decrease
finally
2008 with 30%.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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