You have recently bought an internet service for your house but you are not satisfied with it. You have complained to the customer helpdesk on the phone but no action has been taken. Write a letter to the maneger of the company. In your letter -Describe what is wrong with the service -Explain why you are not happy with the company's response -Say what action you want the manager to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about your

internet

service

which I purchased early

last

week and

also

let you know how disappointing your

costomer

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customer

service

was. Being able to access

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the

internet

service

is a paramount matter as I work from home. The reason why I have chosen your company is because of the great advertisement that I saw on your website.

However

, since the

internet

was connected, the speed of

service

has been not only slow but

also

unstable. In fact, the

internet

service

gets disconnected at least three times a day and

this

is affecting my work,

sach

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such

as online meetings and researching data. I phoned your company and talked to a lady who is one of the customer helpdesk

staffs

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a few days ago. She promised me that she would talk to an

expart

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expert

and provide me

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solution on the same day. But unfortunately, I have not heard from her or your company at all since

then

Additionally

, my

internet

connection has still been dropping down regularly.

This

is unacceptable. I would

therefore

like you to find out what has been happening to my

internet

access and solve

this

issue immediately. If you could

also

reconsider

about

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your

costomer

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customer

service's

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standerd

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standards

and train the

staffs

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to prevent

this

problem again, I would

appriciate

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appreciate

it. Thank you for your consideration and look forward

hearing

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from you soon. Yours faithfully, Kate Smith

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

239 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Getting promotion is one of the biggest drives for people to apply themselves and work hard in modern workplace. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

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International organizations should provide developing countries with practical aid and advice rather than financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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