The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.

The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
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The graphs provide information on how much in million
tonnes
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of
paper
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and packaging,
wood
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pulp
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, and sawn
wood
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were produced in the period of 1980 to 2000 in the UK. As shown in the chart, the
production
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of
paper
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and packaging leads to the total
production
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of the forest industry
while
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the rest did not have much fluctuation. In 1980, a total amount of 230-ton
paper
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and packaging was manufactured. As it leads the forest industry,
wood
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pulp
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and sawn
wood
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produced 200 and 150, respectively. Ten years later,
paper
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and packaging quantity slightly increased by 20 tons
while
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the rest accumulated the same amount of 150
tonnes
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. The
production
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number of
paper
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and packaging kept rising and reached its peak in 2000 at 350
tonnes
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. That left a huge difference in
wood
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pulp
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and sawn-
wood
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production
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numbers with almost 200
tonnes
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differences.
Although
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the
production
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of sawn
wood
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kept falling, it did not have much contrast to the
wood
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pulp
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industry.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, paper, wood, pulp, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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