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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

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Although
women
 and
men
 have different
strengths
 and weaknesses, I do not believe anyone should be excluded from any profession because of their
gender
 as
this
 can greatly hinder
people
 whose
strengths
 do not conform to that of most
people
 in their respective
gender
 categories.
Firstly
, I want to state that I believe
men
 and
women
 have different
strengths
 and weaknesses,
for instance
, many studies have shown that
women
 tend to have
strengths
 in
roles
 that are caring and nurturing in nature, which enables them to excel in job
roles
 like teaching, nursing, and midwifery.
In contrast
, the study
also
 discovered that
men
 tend to do very well in
roles
 that are technical like engineering, and Technology.
this
,
however
, does not mean that there are not
women
 who excel in technical
roles
, and
men
 who prefer more nurturing occupations. The study only shows what the majority of the
people
 in the two different
gender
 categories prefer. The danger of excluding
people
 from participating in any profession
due to
 their
gender
 is that it excludes
people
 whose interests and
strengths
 do not conform to the majority of the
people
 in their
gender
 category. These
people
 are what the study describes as outliers
for example
 a woman who performs extraordinarily in more masculine job
roles
 like engineering and technology and a man who has feminine traits and excels in more traditionally known female
roles
. In conclusion, no one should be excluded from any profession because of their
gender
 even though each
gender
 has its own strength and weaknesses. We have to be careful not to exclude
people
 whose
strengths
 and abilities do not conform with the majority.
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