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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart compares five various levels of post-school qualification in terms of gender in Australia in 1999.
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, as it can be seen, the highest percentage of these people is related to the females who have the skilled vocational diploma,
however
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, of the five items, surprisingly the males witnessed the lowest figures in
this
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 specific certification. The proportion of females who achieved skilled vocational diplomas, post-graduated diplomas and master's degrees was more than males with about 90%, 70% and 60 %, respectively.
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, the male had more tendency to get under graduated diploma with approximately 70% and a bachelor's degree with more or less 55% in comparison with females.

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