The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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A glance at the provided pictures reveals a certain country’s exports value
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commodities number in billions of dollars and the percentage change of these categories between 2015 to 2016. It can be seen that petroleum and engineered goods dominated the export earnings of all years,
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textiles had the highest
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percentage change. In the first year, petroleum products and engineered goods earned over $55
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of billions and respectively managed to
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3 and 8.5
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later. Both of these goods contributed to over $60
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of it in the next year. Agricultural products which contributed around $31
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initially
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year had a slight
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in its percentage to below 1
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. Gems and jewellery,
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, had almost $45
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of export earnings primarily. Unfortunately, it experienced a decline of around 5
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in 2016. Meanwhile, textiles, which had over 15
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of change as the highest
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still became the least
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contributing
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category in the meantime.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rise, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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