The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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commodities number in billions of dollars and the percentage change of these categories between 2015 to 2016. It can be seen that petroleum and engineered goods dominated the export earnings of all years, Change preposition
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later. Both of these goods contributed to over $60 Change the spelling
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of it in the next year. Agricultural products which contributed around $31 Change the spelling
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