The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The picture given presents the data of the top ten countries that manufactured and consumed
electricity
in 2014, measured by billion
kWh
.
Overall
, China and the United States are the two countries that have the biggest production
and consumption
of electricity
. Generally, all of the states have larger electricity
production
than consumption
, except for Germany.
China led the production
and consumption
of electricity
at 5,398 and 5,322 billion
kWh
respectively. In the next place, the United States manufactured 4,099 and used 3,866 billion
kWh
, making it the second largest country in terms of electricity
production
and consumption
. However
, excluding Russia, the rest of the countries' production
and consumption
never exceeded 1,000 billion
kWh
.
Furthermore
, the Republic of Korea is the one and only nation with output and consumption
below 500 billion
kWh
, with 485 and 449 billion
kWh
respectively, which acts as the smallest electric-producing and consuming country. The output of electricity
between Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany varies between 526 and 936 billion
kWh
, with electricity
usage between 455 and 856 billion
kWh
. Even so, Germany is the only one that has a bigger number in consumption
than its output.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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