The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
These figures illustrate the levels and the
materials
used in the
cement
-making process and how the concrete is created by some
materials
such
as
cement
, water, sand and gravel for construction aims.
Overall
, in regard to
cement
production,
this
process consists of five stages beginning with primary
materials
and ending with packaging.
Also
, concrete production is created with four
stuffs
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and a concrete mixer.
According to
the first figure, Limestone and clay are crushed and converted to powder by a crusher, and
then
the powder is transmitted to the mixer. Next stage, these products are heated by the rotating heater. In the
four place
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, it is converted to small pieces by the grinder.
Finally
, the
cement
are
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packed for shipping to the store.
It is clear that
,
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concrete is produced by mixing
Cement
(15%), water(10%) and sand (25%).
Besides
, half of
materials
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the materials
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of concrete is gravel which is added to other
materials
during the turn of a mixer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • construction
  • cement-making
  • raw materials
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • heating
  • grinding
  • cement powder
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • versatility
  • strength
  • aggregate
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