The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart depicts Australia’s different levels of post-school qualifications for men and women respectively.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that in most of the degrees, such
as the master's degree
, the postgraduate degree
, and the skilled vocational diploma
, men accounted for a larger percentage of diplomas.
In more detail, the gap between females
and males
obviously occurred in the skilled vocational diploma
that there was approximately 90 percent
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per cent
males
owned a degree
; whereas
only 10 percent
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per cent
females
gained it. Besides
, the postgraduate diploma
had a similar situation to the master's degree
, both of which displayed that more males
gained the degree
than females
who got it. These two categories existed a gap with
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of
percent
and twenty Change the spelling
per cent
percent
respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, not only the undergraduate diploma
but also
the bachelor’s presented the trend that the number of females
who gained the diploma
exceeded the number of males
. Moreover
, it was clear that the females
gaining this
degree
is the largest category among the other four degrees.Submitted by wayne685241 on
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