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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart depicts Australia’s different levels of post-school qualifications for men and women respectively.
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, it can be clearly seen that in most of the degrees,
such
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 as the master's
degree
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, the postgraduate
degree
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, and the skilled vocational
diploma
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, men accounted for a larger percentage of diplomas. In more detail, the gap between
females
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 and
males
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 obviously occurred in the skilled vocational
diploma
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 that there was approximately 90
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percent
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 of the
males
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 owned a
degree
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;
whereas
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 only 10
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 of
females
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 gained it.
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, the postgraduate
diploma
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 had a similar situation to the master's
degree
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, both of which displayed that more
males
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 gained the
degree
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 than
females
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 who got it. These two categories existed a gap
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 forty
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percent
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 and twenty
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percent
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 respectively.
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, not only the undergraduate
diploma
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 but
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 the bachelor’s presented the trend that the number of
females
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 who gained the
diploma
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 exceeded the number of
males
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.
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, it was clear that the
females
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 gaining
this
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degree
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 is the largest category among the other four degrees.
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