The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The presented graph illustrates 4 different
roles
(coaching, referees
, therapists, and other sections
) in terms of the amounts of volunteers
and paid workers
in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
Overall
, the amount of referees
volunteers
was the lowest in the four roles
, and that of referees
’ salaried workers
was the same. Additionally
, the amounts of volunteers
in coaching, therapists, and other sections
were higher than the amounts of salaried workers
, especially, that of volunteers
in referees
was lower than that of salaried workers
.
The figure for volunteers
coaching was the highest in the four Change the noun form
volunteer
roles
of volunteer, meanwhile, that of employees
of other sections
is the highest in the four roles
of employees
. In addition
, the figures for volunteers
in coaching, therapists, and other sections
stood at around 70, 45, and 60 people, which were higher than those for employees
.
The numbers in referees
role were dissimilar from those described above, the figure of volunteers
of referees
was approximately 30 people, which was less than that of employees
, with almost 40 people.Submitted by ccaa785412dd on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words roles, referees, sections, volunteers, workers, employees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 4 times.
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