The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.

The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The presented graph illustrates 4 different
roles
(coaching,
referees
, therapists, and other
sections
) in terms of the amounts of
volunteers
and paid
workers
in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
Overall
, the amount of
referees
volunteers
was the lowest in the four
roles
, and that of
referees
’ salaried
workers
was the same.
Additionally
, the amounts of
volunteers
in coaching, therapists, and other
sections
were higher than the amounts of salaried
workers
, especially, that of
volunteers
in
referees
was lower than that of salaried
workers
. The figure for
volunteers
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coaching was the highest in the four
roles
of volunteer, meanwhile, that of
employees
of other
sections
is the highest in the four
roles
of
employees
.
In addition
, the figures for
volunteers
in coaching, therapists, and other
sections
stood at around 70, 45, and 60 people, which were higher than those for
employees
. The numbers in
referees
role were dissimilar from those described above, the figure of
volunteers
of
referees
was approximately 30 people, which was less than that of
employees
, with almost 40 people.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words roles, referees, sections, volunteers, workers, employees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • volunteers
  • paid workers
  • roles
  • sports sector
  • Australian town
  • duties
  • motivations
  • significance
  • contribution
  • professionalism
  • specialization
  • sustainability
  • distribution
  • trends
  • volunteerism
  • community engagement
  • professional development
  • accessibility
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