Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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different

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about whether

history

subject is the most important lesson that students should master and whether

Science

and

Technology

are much more crucial than

history

.

While

I think

history

is one of the subjects that students must be familiar with,

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Science

and

Technology

are

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a subject that couldn’t neglect and

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important than

history

.

History

is one of the subjects that students can study both

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culture and

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celebrities. Provided that you prefer to have an impression of a country, you would better to read the relevant

history

, to know where and when the country birthed

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first civilization and how it reached its economic peak and fell down or disappeared from the long

history

whereas

you can’t learn them from English, Math. What’s more, learning the historical celebrities,

for instance

, the first president of America, Washington,

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famous Physics, Newton, would benefit a lot from them which will stimulate you to improve your personality and have

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further

study. Meanwhile, with the development of

science

and

technology

, it is more urgent to learn them for the reason that they offer more useful skills. Compared to

history

, learning

science

and

technology

, you will gain

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of capacities which do not exist in

history

virtually, like the ability to devise a machine which is more convenient for the older to climb the stairs and establish the logic which is useful for almost all jobs currently. And it is

science

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that develops

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society, and offers more individuals more opportunities to have work, which

history

couldn’t have the same effect. In a nutshell, learning

history

your spirit and mood will benefit a lot,

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Science

and

Technology

are more essential than

history

.