Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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about whether
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subject is the most important lesson that students should master and whether
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are much more crucial than
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a subject that couldn’t neglect and
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important than
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is one of the subjects that students can study both
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culture and
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celebrities. Provided that you prefer to have an impression of a country, you would better to read the relevant
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, to know where and when the country birthed
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first civilization and how it reached its economic peak and fell down or disappeared from the long
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whereas
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you can’t learn them from English, Math. What’s more, learning the historical celebrities,
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, the first president of America, Washington,
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famous Physics, Newton, would benefit a lot from them which will stimulate you to improve your personality and have
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further
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study. Meanwhile, with the development of
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and
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, it is more urgent to learn them for the reason that they offer more useful skills. Compared to
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, learning
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, you will gain
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of capacities which do not exist in
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virtually, like the ability to devise a machine which is more convenient for the older to climb the stairs and establish the logic which is useful for almost all jobs currently. And it is
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that develops
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society, and offers more individuals more opportunities to have work, which
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couldn’t have the same effect. In a nutshell, learning
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your spirit and mood will benefit a lot,
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are more essential than
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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