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You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: say what experience you have ask what the work involves enquire about conditions

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Dear Sir My name is SABER Youcef and I am writing
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 letter in reference to the job advertisement for part-time work in a hotel in our local newspaper. Currently, I occupy the position of a French teacher in a private school, and I have been doing that for over 3 years, prior to
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, I was working in retail as a salesman, it was my first work after graduating from university.
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 summer, I will have 3 months of vacation and I am considering applying for the occupation. In the announcement you did not mention the job title,
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 the qualifications that you require for someone to be suitable for the role, is a degree in a certain major one of them? or just the experience is sufficient? Another point is the conditions of the job, like work hours and the tasks which are key factors for me to apply or not. I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully SABER Youcef
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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