The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph presents how 5 different
age
groups
in the UK expended their money across three categories, named food
and drink
, restaurant
and hotel
, and entertainment
in 2004. Overall
, food
drink
expenditure raises with the age
groups
, how much the population spent in restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
, and Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
entertainment
fluctuated between them.
People under 30-year-old
spent a little under 15% of their income in Correct your spelling
30 years old
restaurant
and hotel
and it is the age
group which spend more in this
category. While
food
and drink
, and entertainment
represents
no much more than 5% of the total spending. For the next two Change the verb form
represent
age
groups
, 31-45 and 46-60, food
and drink
experienced a considerable increase and constituted the biggest share of expenditure for both age
groups
, overcoming the other two categories. Whereas
restaurant
and hotel
percentage slightly felt ending at the least way how people between 46 and 60 years-old waste their money, around 10%.
The next age
group showed a contrast in their expenditure, while
food
and drink
and entertainment
experience
an increase Wrong verb form
experienced
around
5% and 10% respectively, Change preposition
of around
entertainment
significantly decrease and it did account for 3% of the total spending. For people over 76, entertainment
havelt
, Correct your spelling
have
food
and drink
slight growth, and entertainment
was the category which experience a significant increase.Submitted by anacarolduque on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, food, drink, restaurant, hotel, entertainment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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