The charts give iformation about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia. Two grahs show about two various TV shows, these are reality shows and game shows

The charts give iformation about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia. Two grahs show about two various TV shows, these are reality shows and game shows
The charts give
iformation
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information
about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different
age
groups in Australia. Two
grahs
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graphs
grass
show about two various TV shows, these are reality shows and game shows.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that women and the 45+
age
group
tend to watch more television than others. In the diorama about reality shows it can be seen that the
persentage
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percentage
of women
are
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is
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twice as many as men who choose
this
gener
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genre
of programme. The rate of people
whatching
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watching
reality shows increases steadily from ages 16 to 45 and over. The lowest
persentage
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percentage
of people from
age
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the age
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cattegory
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category
is a little more than 50% of the
age
group
16-24 and the highest is almost 70% of the
group
45+. In the second diorama about game shows it can be noticed that the interest rate of females and males watching is almost the same. Of the
age
cattegory
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category
,people over 45 are the first who enjoy
this
type of TV program, they reach almost 70%. The second
group
is 16-24, which slightly
exceed
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exceeds
show examples
the bar
50
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of 50
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%,
then
there is
35
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the 35
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-44
group
with 40%,and the
last
,
only
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is only
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1% behind the
group
of 25-34.
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