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The charts give iformation about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia. Two grahs show about two various TV shows, these are reality shows and game shows

The charts give iformation about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia. Two grahs show about two various TV shows, these are reality shows and game shows
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The charts give
iformation
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information
 about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different
age
 groups in Australia. Two
grahs
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graphs
grass
 show about two various TV shows, these are reality shows and game shows.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that women and the 45+
age
group
 tend to watch more television than others. In the diorama about reality shows it can be seen that the
persentage
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percentage
 of women
are
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is
show examples
 twice as many as men who choose
this
gener
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genre
 of programme. The rate of people
whatching
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watching
 reality shows increases steadily from ages 16 to 45 and over. The lowest
persentage
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percentage
 of people from
age
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the age
show examples
cattegory
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category
 is a little more than 50% of the
age
group
 16-24 and the highest is almost 70% of the
group
 45+. In the second diorama about game shows it can be noticed that the interest rate of females and males watching is almost the same. Of the
age
cattegory
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category
,people over 45 are the first who enjoy
this
 type of TV program, they reach almost 70%. The second
group
 is 16-24, which slightly
exceed
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exceeds
show examples
 the bar
50
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of 50
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%,
then
 there is
35
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the 35
show examples
-44
group
 with 40%,and the
last
,
only
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is only
show examples
 1% behind the
group
 of 25-34.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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