The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the ratio between
men
Change noun form
men's
show examples
and
women
Change noun form
women's
show examples
preferences in art disciplines at British
university
Fix the agreement mistake
universities
show examples
in 2011.
Overall
, the biggest percentage of
students
chose English language and literature as a core discipline t at university.
On the contrary
, Philosophy was the least popular subject among male
students
. During the given period, Linguistics and Communication and Media studies were among the popular disciplines with female learners - approximately 240 and 320
students
attended them respectively. In the same year, Philosophy and Art and Design were the least studied subjects among women with 150 and slightly over 115 attendants
accordingly
. In 2011, Communication and Media studies made a significant contribution
in
Change preposition
to
show examples
learning art-related subjects among male
students
- just over 200 undergraduate chose
chose
Remove the redundancy
apply
show examples
these disciplines. Linguistics
also
gained popularity as approximately 180 men chose it to study. In comparison, Philosophy was the least preferable subject to study - as 50 male
students
decided to choose it. It can be
also
noted that
History
Correct article usage
the History
show examples
and Archeology discipline made the least contribution
in
Change preposition
to
show examples
studies-only 115 women chose to study
this
subject and 90 men.
Submitted by katya.8932.45 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • art-related subjects
  • gender distribution
  • predominate
  • significant
  • gender imbalances
  • percentages
  • comparison
  • balanced distribution
  • data
  • figures
  • trends
  • popular
  • least popular
  • subject choices
  • analyze
  • overview
  • summarize
What to do next:
Look at other essays: