The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008
The following pie charts demonstrate the dissimilarity in the proportion of citizens aged 23-65 in different professions in one UK
town
(Use synonyms
Ashby
) and in the whole UK in 2008.
As can be easily observed, the unemployment rates in Use synonyms
Ashby
were generally higher than the nationwide average rates. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Linking Words
while
personal service was the most preferable area of work in only the surveyed Linking Words
town
, office work was equally common for British people as a whole.
Regarding the major components, personal service ranked first and constituted 21% of the workforce in Use synonyms
Ashby
, as opposed to the nation's average of 17%. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, Linking Words
while
the largest proportion of the average UK working population labour in offices at 17%, it was marginally 8% lower at 9% in the Linking Words
town
.
In terms of the remaining sectors, Use synonyms
whereas
technical and professional personnel made up 17% and 14% of the national workforce, respectively, Linking Words
this
figure only stood at only 9% and 8% respectively in the examined area. Considerably, with 16%, construction activity represented a larger slice of Linking Words
Ashby
's occupations. A minor disparity of 4% was witnessed in the percentages of people who work in shops in the Use synonyms
town
compared to nationwide average rates, at 21% and 17% respectively.Use synonyms
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