Women and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, there is

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inequality between

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and

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males

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which is independent

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their ability that includes body and

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aspects. In

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will discuss why some public

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employees based on

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and doesn’t allow them to be in

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career. On the one hand, some

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believe that men and women were created differently so they are distinguished in appearance,

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characteristics

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,

behavioral

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and personality.

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profession

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are sorted by type of task. Some of them need to be

strength

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and some

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others

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need to have innovative and management thoughts. Everyone knows that generally men have physical power and other side women are very creative in partial issues, so they can be successful managers.

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, in the

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there are many

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who are against

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inequality. They believe that for each situation, society should hold a competition between all

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to

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their capabilities.

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some of the best chefs are men in the world and sometimes women are able to do their tasks as

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best judge or engineer. Even

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they could be experienced politicians.

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, they claim that in some cases abilities are more fascinating in some

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that are unexpectedly suitable for them. In conclusion, there are many attitudes about selecting

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females

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and

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in different job positions. In my view, all

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have

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right to apply for several positions and

accepted

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for them just based on their skills not

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.