Recently returned from overseas by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager -Describe the item -Why it is important to you -What you would likr the airline manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask if an item that I left on one of your flights has been found. My flight was JL702 from Melbourne to Tokyo on 10th July and my seat was 17B in economy class. After I got home, I noticed that I had left my
necklace
on the plane. It is a Tiffany
necklace
in rose gold colour with a little diamond,
also
engraved '120922' on the backside.
While
I was on the flight, I took off my
necklace
to wash my face. I am sure I put it in the seat pocket in front of me but unfortunately, I did not realise that I
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totally forgotten about my
necklace
at the time. It was not until I arrived home. I am very upset since it was not only a valuable item but
it
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also
had great sentimental value as my partner gave it for my birthday
last
year. I have already tried to reach out to the customer support centre on the phone a few times.
However
, I was told they cannot find any related information at
this
stage. I would
therfore
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therefore
like to request you to find out if my item
are
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handed over to the lost and found department. I am aware that your office is always busy but if you could consider my situation and proceed
my
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request as soon as possible, I would
be really appreciate
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it. Thank you very much in advance and I look forward
hearing
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from you soon. Yours faithfully, Keiko Hoshi
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