Recently returned from overseas by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager -Describe the item -Why it is important to you -What you would likr the airline manager to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask if an item that I left on one of your flights has been found. My flight was JL702 from Melbourne to Tokyo on 10th July and my seat was 17B in economy class. After I got home, I noticed that I had left my

necklace

on the plane. It is a Tiffany

necklace

in rose gold colour with a little diamond,

also

engraved '120922' on the backside.

While

I was on the flight, I took off my

necklace

to wash my face. I am sure I put it in the seat pocket in front of me but unfortunately, I did not realise that I

have

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totally forgotten about my

necklace

at the time. It was not until I arrived home. I am very upset since it was not only a valuable item but

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also

had great sentimental value as my partner gave it for my birthday

last

year. I have already tried to reach out to the customer support centre on the phone a few times.

However

, I was told they cannot find any related information at

this

stage. I would

therfore

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therefore

like to request you to find out if my item

are

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handed over to the lost and found department. I am aware that your office is always busy but if you could consider my situation and proceed

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request as soon as possible, I would

be really appreciate

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it. Thank you very much in advance and I look forward

hearing

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from you soon. Yours faithfully, Keiko Hoshi

Submitted by keiko_o_1209 on Thu Jul 13 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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thirdly
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moreover
also
for example
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however
although
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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

259 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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