Recently returned from overseas by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager -Describe the item -Why it is important to you -What you would likr the airline manager to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask if an item that I left on one of your flights has been found. My flight was JL702 from Melbourne to Tokyo on 10th July and my seat was 17B in economy class. After I got home, I noticed that I had left my

necklace

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on the plane. It is a Tiffany

necklace

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in rose gold colour with a little diamond,

also

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engraved '120922' on the backside.

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I was on the flight, I took off my

necklace

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to wash my face. I am sure I put it in the seat pocket in front of me but unfortunately, I did not realise that I

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totally forgotten about my

necklace

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at the time. It was not until I arrived home. I am very upset since it was not only a valuable item but

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had great sentimental value as my partner gave it for my birthday

last

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year. I have already tried to reach out to the customer support centre on the phone a few times.

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, I was told they cannot find any related information at

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stage. I would

therfore

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like to request you to find out if my item

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handed over to the lost and found department. I am aware that your office is always busy but if you could consider my situation and proceed

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with my

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request as soon as possible, I would

be really appreciate

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really appreciate

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it. Thank you very much in advance and I look forward

hearing

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to hearing

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from you soon. Yours faithfully, Keiko Hoshi

Submitted by keiko_o_1209 on Thu Jul 13 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

259 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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