The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.
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The illustration given presents the metamorphosis of a silkworm and how
silk
fabric is produced from silkworm cocoons. The silkworm's life cycle begins when eggs are laid on mulberry leaves by an adult
moth
. After that, on the tenth day, the larvas will hatch off and eat leaves as their main source of food.
This
stage takes four to six weeks to occur until the larvas began to wrap themselves with
silk
threads for 3-8 days.
Next,
the cocoon will be fully made and a mature
moth
will come out after approximately two weeks.
Then
the
moth
will mate and lay eggs, and the entire cycle is repeated all over again. In producing
silk
cloth, the cocoons of silkworms are selected and put into water inside a pot, where they are boiled at high
temperature
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temperatures
show examples
. The cocoons will loosen and
silk
threads can be twisted into 300-900 meter single cord. At
this
time, the dyeing step can be done either when they have twisted the threads or after weaving the
silk
cloth.
Overall
, the average lifespan of silkworms is 9-11 weeks and consists of five main stages, which are egg, larva, cocoon, and
moth
,
whereas
the manufacturing processes of
silk
cloth include boiling, unwinding, twisting, and weaving.
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