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The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows how many
students
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 from other countries graduated from Canadian universities between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
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, more
students
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 from outside Canada graduated in 2006 compared to the year before. In 2001, each of the eight provinces had a small percentage of foreign
students
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, all less than 6%. The highest was 7% in New Brunswick, and the lowest was 4% in Ontario.
However
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, by 2006, most international
students
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 who graduated came from universities in New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and British Columbia, making up more than one-third of all graduates. Notably, Manitoba had similar numbers to Newfoundland and Labrador in both years, going up from just under 4% in 2001 to 7% in the next five years. Alberta was the only place where the numbers went down, decreasing by about 2% from almost 6%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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