The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line informs the making of
oil
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and its use in China for 24
years
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from 1982.
Overall
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, it can be seen that both
consumption
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and production increased between 1982 and 2006
although
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in 2006 looked contrast growth for both activities.
First,
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1982 saw a stable
oil
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consumption
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over 8
years
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which used 2
million
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oil
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barrels per day. The
consumption
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began to increase a bit to roughly 3.5 in 1994. It continued to rise and reached 4
million
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in 1998.
Furthermore
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, it hit a peak in 2006 at just above 6
million
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. The same cases happened to the level of
consumption
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which began at 2
million
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. In the first 4
years
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, it increased a bit to 3
million
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. Between 1986 and 1994 witnessed a constant making of
oil
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remained at 3
million
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. 1994 started to rocket up gradually for the next 12
years
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. These growths hit a peak in 2006 when it reached around 3.5
million
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for using the
oil
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.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, years, consumption, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • oil production
  • oil consumption
  • gradual increase
  • surpass
  • overtake
  • reliance on imports
  • disparity
  • steady rise
  • growing gap
  • significant
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