More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel into work every day. The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to the environment. What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long distances into work?

Nowadays, city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel to a workplace every day increasing traffic and damage to the environment. Measures which people
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government can take are mentioned below.
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government should provide eco-friendly ways to travel. Countries should plant more and more trees to save from pollution. Children should use a cycle other than
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car and a bike.
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, if there will be more facilities going to the workplace like railways which
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eco-friendly. Government should make
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industry area way which can help to travel easily.
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should use eco-friendly goods and
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. Awareness should
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to save nature. Groups
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stat should make rules.
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, as movement is increasing and
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public is travelling more and more it is harming
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nature
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air corruption, noise corruption, land corruption and much more.
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, if a worker
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more in
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side compared to the country side will help
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nature.
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employes should do work from the home.
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from
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home will help in so many ways
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such
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to
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travel
on weekend days only. The community should help
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to follow rules. In conclusion, if people will take care of mentioned things
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it will help them a lot.
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, The above measures can help to work
as well as
the company.
Hence
, Workers should get facilities easily in the state so that they can say in the city. The above step can help to from increasing traffic. As more and more workers are deciding the above data will help a lot.
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