The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons

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The provided pie charts illustrate the variability in the percentage of British pupils who can use any language other than English and study at a university in England, in the years 2000 and 2010.

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, the majority of students

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speak Spanish in both years.

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, the

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of people not knowing any tongue other than English decreased considerably in 2010. Spanish users dominated in 2000 with a little less than one-third and continued to attain even 35% in 2010.

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, disciples who knew Another language

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increased by 5%, reaching one-fifth in 2010 from 2000 (15%).

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speakers projected 15% in 2000 but fell to one-tenth in 2010.

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, individuals who are unaware of any lingo except English were a little less than one-third in 2000,

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dropped to 10% in 2010.

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only’ and ‘Two other languages’ categories remained

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10% each in both the years 2000 and 2010.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

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In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.