The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons

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The provided pie charts illustrate the variability in the percentage of British pupils who can use any language other than English and study at a university in England, in the years 2000 and 2010.

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, the majority of students

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speak Spanish in both years.

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, the

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of people not knowing any tongue other than English decreased considerably in 2010. Spanish users dominated in 2000 with a little less than one-third and continued to attain even 35% in 2010.

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, disciples who knew Another language

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increased by 5%, reaching one-fifth in 2010 from 2000 (15%).

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speakers projected 15% in 2000 but fell to one-tenth in 2010.

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, individuals who are unaware of any lingo except English were a little less than one-third in 2000,

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dropped to 10% in 2010.

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only’ and ‘Two other languages’ categories remained

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10% each in both the years 2000 and 2010.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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