The table below gives information about employment rates and the average annual salary of new graduates from an Australian university in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Graduate employment rates and average annual salary (2009)
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The table provides information on the
employment
rates and average annual salaries
of new graduates
from an Australian university in 2009, categorized by their areas of study. Notable features and comparisons emerge from the data.
The field of Health stands out with the highest employment
rate of 93%. Law and Engineering/I.T. follow closely with 87% and 86% employment
rates, respectively. In contrast
, Business lags significantly, with only an 18% employment
rate.
Regarding average annual salaries
, Law and Engineering/I.T. graduates
lead at $59,000 per year, while
Business graduates
, despite a lower employment
rate, earn $52,000 annually. Art and Social Sciences graduates
make $50,000 per year, whereas
Science graduates
have the lowest average salary at $39,000.
In conclusion, pursuing degrees in Health, Law, or Engineering/I.T. appear promising in terms of higher employment
rates and better salaries
. Graduates
in the Business field may face challenges finding employment
, but those who do secure competitive salaries
. Art and Social Sciences graduates
also
find reasonably well-paying jobs. Graduates
should consider their passions and career goals when choosing their fields of study.Submitted by mirnahamada on
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