The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The graphical presentation depicts the number of people taking the Paris Metro Station every hour from 6:00 AM to 10:00 PM.
It is presented in the graph that there are one hundred people taking the Paris Metro by 6:00 in the morning and that the peak hours of the station is around 8:00 AM and 6:00 PM where in a total of 400 people uses the Metro during these hours.
Also
, the hourly graph shows that the number of passengers start to decline within 2 hours after the peak times and started to pick up again after an hour. In addidtion to this
, the slow movement of passengers are noted during the first hour of operation which is 6:00 AM and by the closing of the station which is 10:00 PM. Moreover
, there is also
a noticeable decline in the number of passengers around 4:00 PM.Submitted by janepedraita on
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