The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010.

The bar chart illustrates the different information about physical activities between men and women of the same age in Australia in the year 2010

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, the female do were activities than males of the same age

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the group 15-24 .

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, the elder has the same ratio in performing the exercises.

Initially

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, women's rate of doing regular activity was 47.7 by 15 to 24. It rose to almost 1% in 25 to 34.

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. It gradually increased until it reached 53 in 55-64. At 65 and over it hitting a low point of about 47.1.

On the other hand

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, the male being was 52.8 with age 15-24 it was the higher point in the activity the men, after that it decreased steadily to 42.2 in 25-34.

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, it continued downward until reached 39.5 between 35-44 .

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jumped up to 43.1 in 55-64 .

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