You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to four sites in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, it can e seen that Pavilios gained the most visits from 1990 to 2010.
The trends of tourists visiting the Art Gallary and Pavilios were the same as both these sites recorded a sharp increase at the beginning. While
the Art Gallery started to lose its visitors in 1985, the other site attracted more visitors until 1995, when the proportion peaked at 50%. Although
the proportions here doubled since then
, this
site maintained the highest record at the end
of the shown period with a percentage just above 30%.
The other two shown places showed , on the other hand
. a different response as the percentage plateaued from 1980 to 2000 with an obvious preference towards festival
at 30%. the Pier had the lowest proportion at the beginning. But since 2000,more tourists went there showing a sharp increase. in fact, the percentage doubled in 2010 as they reached more than 20%.Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
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