In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what you extent do you agree or disagree?

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days the practical skills of the worker are gaining more popularity than his high
knowledge
of
theory
.
Consequently
, the idea arises that in the future higher education will not have much importance. Nowadays, ads are becoming more and more common, in which the words "We need workers with practical
knowledge
and a diploma is not important to us!" "Diploma" refers to the theoretical
knowledge
gained in the course of studying at the institute. In ancient times there were no books from which people could study
theory
,
therefore
, if we start studying from the roots,
then
practical skills appeared long before theoretical ones. Ancient people tried everything and the result was different. At
first
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they caught animals and ate their fresh meat.
Then
after the thunder hit the animal's corpse, the meat became fried and they realized that meat became tastier and softer. So they passed on their
knowledge
first
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, and
then
, after advent of writing, they began to write everything down and pass it on from generation to generation. For me,
theory
os
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of the utmost importance. It is the basis in many areas. It is impossible to know exactly which organ hurts a person without examining the location of
the
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all organs.
Also
in
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other industries: without studying the instructions, we will not be able to start the car or turn on the computer and use different applications on it.
This
does not
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the fact that there are other professions that do not require bookish
knowledge
, but even before preparing a dish for the
first
time, we read the recipe. Many may say that the car can be started without reading how it works, but I will remain
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my opinion.Theoretical
knowledge
has already taken root so deeply that neither now nor in the future without them is in any way.Without
theory
, there is no practice.
Also
without
practice
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we are nobody, but
theory
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should come
first
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