The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of regular work out of Australian people in different genres, male and female, and six different ages from 15 years old to more than 65 In 2010.
Overall
, we can see that in the youngest
group
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men
did work out more than
women
,
while
in other categories
women
had the highest proportion except in the oldest
group
both had the same percentage. In 2010, in the youngest
group
,
men
did more regular physical activity than
women
, their percentages were about 53% and 47% respectively.
However
, in two groups of 25 to 34 and 35 to 44
women
had the highest ratio. In 35 to
44
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there was more than a 10% difference between the two genres that was the highest among other groups,
men
40% and
women
53%.
Moreover
, in the other two groups 45 to 54 and 55 to 64, more than 50% of
women
did regular exercise, in comparison with
men
they had 43% to 45%. In the
last
group
which was people who were 65 and over both genres had the same percentage about 47%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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