The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The supplied bar chart depicts the percentage of businesses that make commerce purchases in the industry in Canada from 2015 to 2019. The horizontal axis represents the proportion of businesses
whereas
,the vertical axis displays the industry in Canada.it is crystal clear that information and communication are at the top in all years.At the outset,both wholesale and retail had the same number in the same year.In other ,words it had approximately 50%. It can also
be seen that
Construction is in increase,on the other hand
,manufacturing is fluctuating .moreover
,the retail industry is around 55% in both 2018 and 2019.Also
,manufacturing in 2015 was lower than in 2019.In a nutshell ,we can say that information and communication reach a high.Submitted by nameomani322 on
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