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The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002.

The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002.
The pie chart presents categorized data on families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Among all age groups, elderly individuals, regardless of their marital status, represent the smallest proportion, accounting for only 7% of singles and 5% of couples.
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, sole parents and single individuals without children constitute the largest segments, comprising 26% and 24% respectively, in the United Kingdom (UK).
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, couples with children make up only 15% of the chart,
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 all households collectively contribute 14% as well. Any significant correlation does not observe related to single and couples or even offspring in the chart.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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