The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts show the proportions of water usage on three items(industrial,agricultural and domestic) in 6 different countries around the world.

Overall

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,the highest proportion among

four

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the four

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countries belongs to agricultural

use

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whereas

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, Europe and South America spent much amount of water on domestic sections. Industrial usage in North America and Europe was about 48% and 53% respectively and had almost half of the total amount.

In contrast

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, less than 10% of water consumption in Africa,Central Asia and South Asia was allocated to

this

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section .(7% , 5% and 12%) Moving to agricultural

use

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,a remarkable ratio was dedicated to

this

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field

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apply

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84% for African people,88% for Central

Asian

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Asians

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and 81%

regarding

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for

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South East

Asian

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Asians

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Besides

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,North

American

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America

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and European spent less than 40% of

this

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section.( 39% the former and 32% the latter)

On the other hand

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,domestic

use

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has the same proportion of about 7% in South East and Central Asia , just 2% more in Africa.

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This

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These

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feagures

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figures

were 15% and 13% respectively for

Eropean

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European

and North

American

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America

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. All in all ,the highest percentage

referes

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refers

to South

American

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America

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with

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about 19% in terms of domestic

use

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words use with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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6
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media?

Is it better to take a gap year to travel or to go straight to university? Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

You are planning a tour with your family to a tourist destination. Write a letter to a hotel manager asking about the availability of accommodation for the days you will be here and also tell him what type of room you prefer.

Economic progress is one way to measure the success of a country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than economic progress?