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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. – I am on vacation • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.- investigate the case/send revised credit card statemen

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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 letter to draw your attention towards some of the incorrect expense entries listed
out
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on my
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month
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credit
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card
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 statement
of
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 your esteemed bank. I , Xian Juan, a software consultant by profession have opened a Smart Youth Account with TD
bank
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Bank
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. Following that, I opted for Aventura premium
credit
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card
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 facility services considering the benefits and annual charges on the
card
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. Recently, based on my
credit
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 history score, I was eligible for the
credit
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 limit increase and got the limits revised from $5000 CA to $7500 CAD per month.
Few
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 days back when I reconciled my
credit
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card
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 statement with my spending expenditure for
previous
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the previous
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 month , I observed there were 2
such
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 instances where
amount
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 was deducted from
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card
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my card
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however
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 those purchases were not done by me as I was out on vacation to India and my
card
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 was not operational internationally. Those two entries were of some electronic purchases done from BestBuy Dundas Street West on
6th
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the 6th
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 and 10th
July
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of July
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 for $500 CAD & $1450 CAD respectively. I have attached the transaction details of those records for your reference. I would like you to investigate
this
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 fraud transaction urgently and send
my
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me
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 the revised statement so that I can go ahead and make the payment. Let me know in case of any other details required. Hoping for your earliest response on
this
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 issue. Thanks & Regards, Xian Juan
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