You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. – I am on vacation • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.- investigate the case/send revised credit card statemen

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention towards some of the incorrect expense entries listed

out

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apply

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on my

last

month

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month's

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credit

card

statement

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from

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your esteemed bank. I , Xian Juan, a software consultant by profession have opened a Smart Youth Account with TD

bank

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Bank

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. Following that, I opted for Aventura premium

credit

card

facility services considering the benefits and annual charges on the

card

. Recently, based on my

credit

history score, I was eligible for the

credit

limit increase and got the limits revised from $5000 CA to $7500 CAD per month.

Few

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days back when I reconciled my

credit

card

statement with my spending expenditure for

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the previous

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month , I observed there were 2

such

instances where

amount

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the amount

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was deducted from

card

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my card

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however

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,however

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those purchases were not done by me as I was out on vacation to India and my

card

was not operational internationally. Those two entries were of some electronic purchases done from BestBuy Dundas Street West on

6th

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and 10th

July

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of July

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for $500 CAD & $1450 CAD respectively. I have attached the transaction details of those records for your reference. I would like you to investigate

this

fraud transaction urgently and send

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the revised statement so that I can go ahead and make the payment. Let me know in case of any other details required. Hoping for your earliest response on

this

issue. Thanks & Regards, Xian Juan

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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238 words

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