The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Overall
, between the years
1995 and 2004, the number
of train passengers
in Sydney have significantly increase
, from 250 Change the verb form
increased
million
passengers
in 1995 to 279 million
passengers
in 2004.
More specifically, between the years
of
1995 to 1999, there has been a stable increase in the Change preposition
apply
number
of passengers
, with the growth of passengers
between 1995 to 1996 being the highest of the 4 years
, increasing by about 10 million
people. However
though in the next 2 year
, a sharp rise can be identified with a massive jump from 266 Fix the agreement mistake
years
million
passengers
to 300 million
passengers
, a jump of 40 million
passengers
, which peaked on
the Change preposition
in
year
of
2001.
After that though, the Change preposition
apply
number
of passengers
face a rapid decline in the span of one year
from 2001 to 2002, bringing the number
of passengers
down to 280 million
person
. In the consequent Change to a plural noun
people
years
of 2003 and 2004, the number
of people travelling by train dipped by a tiny amount, decreasing from 1 to 2 million
people.
In conclusion, the number
of train passengers
in Sydney have
been increasing Change the verb form
has
from
1995 and reached Change preposition
since
it's
peak in 2001. Since Replace the word
its
then
, the number
of passengers
have
Change the verb form
has
fell
to around 279 Change the verb form
fallen
felled
million
person
in the Change to a plural noun
people
year
2003 and remained the same for the next year
of
2004 as well.Change preposition
apply
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