The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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, between the

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1995 and 2004, the

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of train

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in Sydney have significantly

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, from 250

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passengers

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in 1995 to 279

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passengers

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in 2004. More specifically, between the

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1995 to 1999, there has been a stable increase in the

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of

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, with the growth of

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between 1995 to 1996 being the highest of the 4

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, increasing by about 10

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people.

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though in the next 2

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, a sharp rise can be identified with a massive jump from 266

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passengers

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to 300

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passengers

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, a jump of 40

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passengers

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, which peaked

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2001. After that though, the

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of

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face a rapid decline in the span of one

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from 2001 to 2002, bringing the

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of

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down to 280

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. In the consequent

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of 2003 and 2004, the

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of people travelling by train dipped by a tiny amount, decreasing from 1 to 2

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people. In conclusion, the

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of train

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in Sydney

have

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been increasing

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1995 and reached

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peak in 2001. Since

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, the

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of

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have

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fell

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to around 279

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person

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in the

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2003 and remained the same for the next

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of

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2004 as well.