The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, between the
years
1995 and 2004, the
number
of train
passengers
in Sydney have significantly
increase
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, from 250
million
passengers
in 1995 to 279
million
passengers
in 2004. More specifically, between the
years
of
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1995 to 1999, there has been a stable increase in the
number
of
passengers
, with the growth of
passengers
between 1995 to 1996 being the highest of the 4
years
, increasing by about 10
million
people.
However
though in the next 2
year
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, a sharp rise can be identified with a massive jump from 266
million
passengers
to 300
million
passengers
, a jump of 40
million
passengers
, which peaked
on
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the
year
of
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2001. After that though, the
number
of
passengers
face a rapid decline in the span of one
year
from 2001 to 2002, bringing the
number
of
passengers
down to 280
million
person
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. In the consequent
years
of 2003 and 2004, the
number
of people travelling by train dipped by a tiny amount, decreasing from 1 to 2
million
people. In conclusion, the
number
of train
passengers
in Sydney
have
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been increasing
from
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1995 and reached
it's
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peak in 2001. Since
then
, the
number
of
passengers
have
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fell
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to around 279
million
person
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people
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in the
year
2003 and remained the same for the next
year
of
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2004 as well.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, number, passengers, million, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "jump" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • passenger volume
  • trend
  • peak times
  • off-peak times
  • punctuality
  • infrastructure
  • correlation
  • traffic
  • delays
  • satisfaction
  • efficiency
  • transportation system
  • reliability
  • urban mobility
  • capacity
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