The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cemen-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given diagrams illustrate the several steps of
cement
production
and its equipment, and the process
of cement
is used to make concrete for building aims.
Overall
, there are five stages of cement
production
starting from the mixture of all the raw materials to packing them into bags, and there are only two stages of concrete production
.
Looking at the information of the cement
-making process
, all the raw substances including limestone and clay are crushed by a machine so that it becomes powder. Then
, this
powder is mixed into the mixer machine. Subsequently
, it passes through a rotating heater where fire is added into the heater hole. The next process
is putting the substance into a grinder, and the cement
is ready to pack into the bags.
With respect to concrete production
, there is a particular formula in this
process
which is 15% of cement
, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% of gravel put into a big concrete mixer. All those materials are mixed and it is ready to use for building purposes.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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