The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cemen-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cemen-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given diagrams illustrate the several steps of
cement
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production
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and its equipment, and the
process
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of
cement
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is used to make concrete for building aims.
Overall
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, there are five stages of
cement
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production
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starting from the mixture of all the raw materials to packing them into bags, and there are only two stages of concrete
production
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. Looking at the information of the
cement
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-making
process
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, all the raw substances including limestone and clay are crushed by a machine so that it becomes powder.
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,
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powder is mixed into the mixer machine.
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, it passes through a rotating heater where fire is added into the heater hole. The next
process
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is putting the substance into a grinder, and the
cement
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is ready to pack into the bags. With respect to concrete
production
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, there is a particular formula in
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process
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which is 15% of
cement
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, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% of gravel put into a big concrete mixer. All those materials are mixed and it is ready to use for building purposes.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement, production, process with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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