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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
British
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students
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 who study in a single university that are able to communicate in other
languages
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 than only English in the years 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, the charts show that
British
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 university
students
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 in England are able to talk in
Spanish
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 and other
languages
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 more in the year 2010 than in 2000. In 2000, the majority of
British
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students
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 in a university are able to speak only
Spanish
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 accounting for 30%.
On the other hand
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, 20% are people who only speak English.
However
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, french and other
languages
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 are spoken by 30% collectively. For the year 2010, there were more
students
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 who use
Spanish
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 and other
languages
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 up to 35% and 20% respectively.
In contrast
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, the
French-speaking
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number of French-speaking
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 in
British
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students
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 decreased from 15% to only 10%. In comparison, from 2000 to 2010, there was a 10% increase in
Spanish
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 and other language speakers among
British
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students
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.
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Moreover
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 the number of
students
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 who couldn’t speak any language other than English downed to 10%.
Nonetheless
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, the amount of German as a second language remained the same at 10% for both years 2000 and 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words british, students, languages, spanish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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