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"You nearly complete your trial work period of two months and desire to become an official employee in the company. Write an email to your manager: Saying why you deserve to pass the trial work period Explaining what benefits you are able to bring for the company if passed Explaining what skills you should improve Stating your long-term career goals if your have an opportunity to work in the company Try to write a minimum of 50 words."

#work #period #two #months #desire #employee #company #email #manager #skills #career #goals #opportunity
Dear Sir/Madam, Thank you for giving me a good chance to become an official employee
in
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 the company.
This
 is an
honor
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 for me to work in a good environment and active place. I had
a lots
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 of experience
for
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this
 position for a long time before. So , I can work under pressure and handle difficult tasks easily.
Besides
, I can support
customer
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 during working time as well.
Although
 my Technical skill is not good now
but
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I can improve
it
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 by reading
document
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 and
practicing
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 it more at home as well. And I hope to be
an
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 leader next 2 years to contribute my talents to
company's
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 development in the future. Have a nice day. Best Regards, Nguyen Anh Tu
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