The chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
The chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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the graph
New Brunswick got the highest scores with about 8% in 2001 and approximately 13% in 2006 got ahead of other Add a comma
,graph
universitets
. Correct your spelling
universities
By contrast
, the
Ontario appealed the lowest rates in reportings with about 3% in 2001 and nearly 6% in 2006.
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It is clear that
there were Manitoba and Newfoundland and Labrador that had equal numbers with
both years. There is British Columbia Change preposition
in
that
had noticeably high ranks above Correct pronoun usage
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other academy
except New Brunswick, Change the wording
another academy
other academies
however
the paces of 2001 Add a comma
,however
does
not impress. Change the verb form
do
In
addition
we have Alberta with slightly identical ranges with British Columbia in 2001.
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Overall
, although
New Brunswick had the
considerably towering grades as well there Correct article usage
apply
were
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was
variety
of Add an article
a variety
Universitets
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Universities
such
as Nova Scotia, British Columbia and Quebec that were on the way caught
up Change the verb form
to catch
his
records.Change preposition
with his
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