The pie chart shows change sin 4 employment sector in two towns.

The charts illustrate information about changes in job parts in two different towns.

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of city A displays that service after a

while

increased considerably.

Whereas

in town B Manufacturing gradually decreased.

It is clear that

in town

A

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smallest minority of the total was services in 1960 (29). After

50-year

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period

this

part

by far serged to 64 in 2010. By applying contrast, the biggest

part

in 1960 was Manufacturing (41).

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at the end

of

a

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period in question 2010 decreased to 20. On the other town B smallest

part

in 1960 was servicing it occupy 10,

however

after a

while

decreased considerably to 20.

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Manufacturing in 1960 was

biggest

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the biggest

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part

of the total it occupy 70,

while

declined by 58

at the end

of

period

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the period

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in question.