The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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This

bar graph illustrates the

value

of exports of different items in a country in 2015 and 2016.

It is clear that

the

export

rate of petroleum and engineered

products

are notably high than the other

products

. The third most popular

export

category was gems and jewellery in both years,

while

agricultural items earned around 30 billion dollars in these two years.

According to

this

figure

Add a comma

,figure

show examples

textile shows the lowest

value

Change preposition

apply

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every time at 28

billions

Change to singular

billion

show examples

in 2015 and 32

billions

Change to singular

billion

show examples

in 2016.

Although

in 2016 the

export

proportion of petroleum and engineered foods

were

Correct subject-verb agreement

was

show examples

same

Correct article usage

the same

show examples

at 62 billion dollars which is 30 dollars higher than

agricultural

Correct article usage

the agricultural

show examples

export

value

. In 2016 petroleum and engineered category showed the highest rate,

wherease

Correct your spelling

whereas

other

products

were higher in 2015.

Moreover

, agricultural

item

Fix the agreement mistake

items

show examples

had the same

export

value

percentage when other

products

had differences between the rate.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

144 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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